I noticed you are looking for advanced critique. I am in no way one to speak here, but if you really want someone to point out any little thing that could make the image that much betterer... The wood on the sheath just ain't doing it for me, I think I am being a bit picky on this. It just seems a bit fake, compared to the ultra realistic metal, leather and fabric textures.
The other thing I see, but maybe its just my perspective is the sword doesn't seem to be sitting on the blade or on the handle. I know they are made to be perfectly ballanced but I think one end would end up resting, but maybe I'm wrong or maybe the blade is resting its just hard to tell.
These comments are WAYYYY Picky cause the image is VERY NICE as it is. Way out of my league. I only pointed those things out as I wanted to make a comment and you have this set for advanced comments. I hope my small critique may help to furhter this
thanks for the Critique, thats just what i was looking for,you dont need to feel picky,
i search any thing to push this image as high as it can get, and thanks again, i'm glad you liked it.
this iamge is 1 of 3, and in each one there are good and bads, and i just cant get to A ONE GOOD IMAGE ( btw: did you check the other ? )
Just wow... I took a look at all three and you did a great job on them. I don't think I'm even qualified to crit this. But I do have to ask what program and HDRI you are using.
they worth it, i guess that talented people can get the same resultes with 5 MB HDRI, but.... Im not among them !
so, it takes realllllly long to render it, i use 2 pc's in a network render and it taked atleast 4 hours for normal high rez. image
( it really depend on the Scene ) but in any hdri scene it makes it 4 times slower !
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I noticed you are looking for advanced critique. I am in no way one to speak here, but if you really want someone to point out any little thing that could make the image that much betterer... The wood on the sheath just ain't doing it for me, I think I am being a bit picky on this. It just seems a bit fake, compared to the ultra realistic metal, leather and fabric textures.
The other thing I see, but maybe its just my perspective is the sword doesn't seem to be sitting on the blade or on the handle. I know they are made to be perfectly ballanced but I think one end would end up resting, but maybe I'm wrong or maybe the blade is resting its just hard to tell.
These comments are WAYYYY Picky cause the image is VERY NICE as it is. Way out of my league. I only pointed those things out as I wanted to make a comment and you have this set for advanced comments. I hope my small critique may help to furhter this
i search any thing to push this image as high as it can get, and thanks again, i'm glad you liked it.
this iamge is 1 of 3, and in each one there are good and bads, and i just cant get to A ONE GOOD IMAGE ( btw: did you check the other ? )
thanks again, you been very helpful.
im useing maya and Rendering in Mentalray and just a little bit Photoshop for post.
and the Hdri is from a Dosch collection High rez. of about 6000x3000 (50 mb) .... i guess its worth the time for this high HDRI output.
thanks again, and keep watchin
so, it takes realllllly long to render it, i use 2 pc's in a network render and it taked atleast 4 hours for normal high rez. image
( it really depend on the Scene ) but in any hdri scene it makes it 4 times slower !
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